Elkstree - ''Uptown Girls'' - A Changed World (F-f nc)

1. “A Changed World”
(F/f nc hard)

written by
Elkstree

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UPTOWN GIRLS #1

“A Changed World”

Brief Summary:

Hey all – this is my first fan fiction in a few months and its kind of long but I think it’s a good fic. I just saw the movie “Uptown Girls” and was sort of inspired to write this fic loosely based on the movie. There will probably be a few sequels as well; here is a brief summary of the movie and the characters for those who are not familiar with it.

PS: See the movie its pretty cool

Brittany Murphy stars as Molly Gunn, a twenty two year old Manhattan socialite and the child of a rock star. When Molly’s trust fund is bilked by her manager, she’s forced to find a job. She’s hired as a nanny for Ray Schleine (Dakota Fanning), a spoiled 9-year-old daughter of Roma (Heather Locklear) who has put her career as a record company executive ahead of her family. Emotional distance from a parent during childhood is something Molly knows well, and she and Ray form a close bond.

FIC BEGINS HERE (###)

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FLASHBACK: RAY’S APARTMENT

Molly Gunn was furiously scrubbing plates (a job which she detested anyhow) while listening to her nine year old charge yell orders and insult her.

“Isn’t cleaning the dishes supposed to be the maid’s job?” asked an irritated Molly

“She can’t dry without getting all the spots off” retorted Ray matter of factly.

“And you can’t dry without wasting a million rolls of paper towels, don’t you know with every roll you waste a tree in the rain forest dies?” Molly informed Ray.

“and I’m gonna die of botulism from all these germs you stupid hippie, that is if I don’t die of mad cow disease first which isn’t something you apparently have to worry about because you don’t have a brain to fry in the first place!” responded an annoyed Ray.

Molly Gunn stood silent for a moment shocked at the verbal barrage that Ray had just launched against her but before she could reply, Ray continued.

“Now give me that plate” ordered Ray attempting to grab it from Molly’s hand

Molly however held firm to the plate

“Give it!” yelled Ray.

The two struggled for a few moments with the plate until Molly let go sending the expensive piece of glassware crashing to the floor in a million pieces.

“Now look what you did you jerk, get a broom” commanded Ray

Molly had just about enough of the spoiled nine year old brat and began to walk away when Ray again spoke.

“Hey when you work for me, you leave when I say you can leave” stated Ray.

“I got news for you, I don’t work for you, I am employed by your mother” replied Molly.

“Do you see her anywhere, newsflash you’re not gonna unless you make an appointment or hang around her bedroom door at three am in the morning. In the meantime you are working for me” responded Ray

“Is that so?” said Molly growing angrier by the second

“Uh-huh” replied Ray sarcastically.

“Well then I got news for you I quit!” yelled Molly slamming the kitchen door. Unfortunately she didn’t realize that it was a swinging door and therefore ended up getting hit right in the face and sent crashing to the floor.

(INGRID’s APARTMENT)

“and that is just one example of the living hell this child put me through today Ing” stated Molly nursing her wounds both physical and emotional at her best friend’s Ingrid’s apartment.

“How is your bloody nose?” asked Ingrid to Molly who was lying on the couch extremely irritated at the days events.

“Its getting better, but can you believe the nerve of that child. I mean here I am trying to do my best and all I get is disrespect and backtalk from her.” stated an exasperated Molly.

“She certainly seems like a child who has issues” replied Ingrid.

“That’s certainly putting it mildly, in the course of one day I’ve been ordered around, flipped off, made to feel lower than pond scum and had a door slammed in my face by this brat…” replied Molly who was too embarrassed to tell her friend that the door incident was really her fault.

“...I’m never going back to work there. I don’t need this aggravation” continued Molly.

“You are right you don’t need or deserve this aggravation or disrespect from that child but quitting isn’t going to help anyone here. Roma Schleine needs someone to watch her little girl and lets face it you need the money Molly” replied Ingrid sensibly.

“Well than what do you suggest I do?” asked Molly.

“Spank her…” stated Ingrid “After all Roma said that you’re totally in charge of Ray when she is not there and the child is clearly asking for it.” She continued.

“Oh come on Ing I can’t spank Ray. There is something going on there in that house that is causing her to act like this but I just can’t figure out what” replied Molly.

“Do whatever you like Molly but just remember either way you have to kick in half of this month’s rent so if you quit your job you are going to have to find a new one and there are not a lot of places in New York that will hire someone with your limited experience.” Replied Ingrid

Molly groaned resigned to the fact that she would have to head back to work the next day babysitting Ray “the dictator” Schleine.

(The next day RAY’s APARTMENT)

Molly’s second day at her new job was no better than the first. In fact by 3 pm she had decided to herself that it was definitely worse. Besides performing all types of menial jobs around the Schleine household, Molly had to endure Ray’s constant disrespect, backtalk and general irritating manner.

It was nearing 4 pm at which time Ray had scheduled a play date which Molly would have to drag her to since Roma did not allow Ray to walk to streets of the city alone. Ray however was being obstinant as usual.

“Come on Ray, you have to wear this jacket its freezing outside” stated a tired and exhausted Molly as she tried to coax her nine year old charge to put on her jacket.

“No I hate that thing and you can’t make me wear it” whined Ray as she struggled away from her nanny’s grip.

“Come on Ray I’m not kidding and I’m not going to argue with you, now put the jacket on” stated Molly growing more irritated with Ray by the minute.

“No!” yelled Ray at the top of her lungs grabbing the jacket from Molly and throwing it across the apartment.

For a moment all was silent in the Schleine apartment, Molly walked into the living room where the jacket had landed, picked it up and walked back towards Ray.

“Okay Ray you don’t have to put this jacket on” said Molly.

Ray smiled as she had once again won another battle of wills with her nanny.

“You don’t have to put it on because you aren’t going anywhere” Molly continued.

Ray’s smile quickly vanished and opened her mouth to protest but was cut off by Molly.

“Did you not get enough sleep last night Ray Schleine?....” asked Molly “I mean from your behavior today you seem pretty cranky, irritable and probably overtired and in good need of some good rest.”

“I’m not tired!” whined Ray stamping her foot on the floor.

“Well Ray although I doubt I’ll win any prizes for originality I think that the punishment that you have earned yourself for all your bratty behavior over the past few days is spending the rest of the day in your room and under the covers” replied Molly matter of factly.

“No!, you can’t punish me, you can’t make me do anything. You’re not my mother!” said Ray who was getting extremely angry.

“I don’t care what you say I’m leaving” shouted Ray grabbing the coat from Molly and heading towards the door.

“Oh no you don’t!” said Molly quickly taking after her nine year old charge. She quickly apprehended Ray and spun her around to face her. “You better get in your room in the next ten seconds young lady or you are going to get something you really won’t like” commanded Molly looking Ray right in the eye.

“Go to hell” shouted Ray

That was it in a flash Molly knelt down on the ground grabbed Ray and held her over her bent knee.

“Let me go!” shouted Ray

However, Molly was unmoved and she began to administer a series of spanks to Ray’s skirt clad backside.

“OW!, stop it” cried Ray tears beginning to stream down her face as tried to struggle away from Molly’s grasp which only seemed to infuriate Molly further.

“That’s it missy!” Molly snapped as she lifted Ray off her knee but still holding firm to her hand dragged her towards the couch in the living room.

“I’ve had about enough of you today, young lady” said Molly as she sat down on the couch, grabbed Ray and pulled her across her lap.

Despite Ray’s protesting howls, Molly flipped up Ray’s skirt and began to spank the seat of Ray’s little pink panties as hard as she could bring herself to.

“Ouch stop it, let me up” cried Ray who had never been spanked before in her life and could not believe how much it hurt. Molly however was intent on teaching Ray a lesson that she would not soon forget.

“This <SLAP> is for all the stuff <SPANK> you have put <SLAP> me through <SPANK> the past <SMACK> few days <SPANK> Ray Schleine <SPANK> <SPANK>.

“Please stop Molly it hurts” cried Ray bucking and kicking across her nanny’s lap.

“Stop that Ray!” commanded Molly as she aimed two swats to Ray’s bare thighs. “You really deserve this <SPANK> How dare you! <SPANK> How dare you! <SLAP> treat me or anyone else in <SLAP> the manner <SMACK> that you have in the <SLAP> past few days <SMACK>. This <SPANK> is for every dirty look <SPANK> fresh response <SPANK> or insult <SLAP> I have had to <SMACK> put up with <SPANK> from you <SLAP> over the past few days <SLAP> is that understood Miss Ray?” <SLAP> asked Molly.

“Yes!” cried Ray who was now sobbing non-stop unable to take anymore spanks from Molly’s hand

The pain was unbelievable and Ray didn’t even realize that her spanking was over until Molly smoothed her skirt down and helped the crying child off her lap.

Almost immediately Ray’s hands shot to her sore stinging bottom and she clutched it in her hands all the time crying so hard she could hardly see.

Molly though quickly grabbed Ray and while drying her tears with a tissue informed her young charge on how her world was about to change.

“Ray Schleine, I will no longer tolerate any of the disrespect that you have being showing me over the past few days. Whether you like it or not I am the adult here not you and your mother has placed you in my care and while you are in my care you will do what I say and if I get any argument or backtalk you will simply be turned over my lap for a spanking is that understood?” asked Molly

“But I…” started Ray

“Is that understood?” said Molly cutting Ray off.

“Yes” replied Ray angry that Molly was treating her like a child.

“Okay then I think you have a choice you can either go to your room and get ready for bed like a young lady or if you force me to I will carry you to your bedroom like a child” Molly informed Ray.

“But…But...” whined Ray

“Didn’t you just learn anything about arguing and backtalk Ray Schleine...” asked Molly “Now I want you to march yourself to your room and get ready for bed now” she continued in the most serious tone she could muster.

“Fine” replied Ray angrily as she stomped off to her room slamming the door behind her.

“I will be in to check on you in a few moments” Molly called after her, herself somewhat shocked at the events that just took place. Even though Ray had been thoroughly punished for her actions Molly still had no idea what caused Ray to be so hostile towards her in the first place. As she stood there thinking this over her thoughts were interrupted as the phone rang and Molly ran to the den to pick it up.

(RAY’s ROOM ten minutes later)

Ray Schleine climbed into bed and began to cry softly to herself as her head hit the soft pillows. She was angry, embarrassed and felt more alone than ever. However her thoughts too were interrupted by a knock on her bedroom door.

“Go away” she cried.

However the door was pushed open and Molly walked in.

“Now what did I just tell you about taking that tone with me young lady?” asked Molly

“I don’t care” replied Ray who was still angry about being spanked.

“From what I can tell you got off pretty easy, when I was your age if I pulled some of the stuff you did, my mother would have spanked me good with her hairbrush” stated Molly as she pulled down the shades and drew the curtains in Ray’s room.

“I don’t care, you’re not my mother” cried Ray as she sobbed into her pillow.

“Well that’s true but speaking of your mother she just called and isn’t going to be home until very late tonight” said Molly.

“What else is new” replied Ray.

“Oh come on Ray, you can’t say that if you spoke to your mother the way you spoke to me today that the result wouldn’t have been any different” stated Molly to the crying child.

“Yes it would have she wouldn’t have cared” cried Ray.

“Oh come on now Ray I can’t believe that” said Molly

“Its true she doesn’t care about me, all she cares about is her record deals, her money and her stupid boyfriends that she brings home night after night…” cried Ray. “…and then she hires people like you to watch me so she doesn’t have to worry about me, so why don’t you just leave me alone like the rest of the nannies she hired in the past did” Ray continued

“Ray I..” stated Molly

“Now you told me I had to go to bed so why don’t you just leave and let me do that” the nine year old cried.

“Ray I’m not going to leave because I genuinely care about you and you know that I would not have spanked you today if I didn’t care about you right?” said Molly

“So what?” replied Ray angrily.

“Well if you just give me a chance and I give you a chance then maybe we could make this work okay” said Molly as she tucked Ray into bed and wiped her tears with a tissue.

Ray surprised that Molly was tucking her into bed let her guard down and responded “Okay I’ll try” although still wondering if she could really trust Molly.

“Well that’s good…” said Molly as she flicked on Ray’s nightlight. “I know sometimes the world can seem like a cold, harsh place but there are people who care about you Ray you just have to stop shutting them out” said Molly

“Okay Molly I’ll try” replied Ray who was very sleepy and exhausted from the day’s events.

“Okay well goodnight Ray” said Molly as she began to exit the room.

“Hey Molly?” chirped Ray.

“Yes?”

“That was the first time in a long time that anyone tucked me in” said Ray.

Now it was Molly’s turn to cry as she wiped a tear from her own cheek as she couldn’t believe how neglected this girl really was. Molly knelt beside Ray’s bed and gave her a kiss on the forehead.

“I really do care for you Ray, I hope in time you can believe that” said Molly.

“I do” yawned Ray as she gently drifted off to sleep.

Molly quietly pulled a chair from Ray’s study desk and sat down watching Ray sleep knowing that she herself would be there all night and she would be there when Ray awoke in the morning.

– The End –

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This story was written by Elkstree, who kindly allowed me to host it on my web site. Please note that my usual disclaimers do not necessarily apply to this story, as it was not written by myself.